
Interview Memo
K-fashion Designer, Younhee Park
Best entry of Interview Memo
Used complete sentences for my memo
Highly readable due to the use of easy words
Manageable chunks of paragraphs
Headings clearly explains the contents of each paragraph
Biggest Challenge
Translating and paraphrasing her words
Using redundant and repetitive words.
What I revised?
Rephrase the words that were repeated more than twice in the memo
Still, leave some of her remarks without rewording not to distort her values in the remarks
What influenced me to write the interview memo?
A week after the interview, Ms. Park sent me an email about her perspective on K-fashion in written words, since she thought what she had talked with me during the interview was not enough. Thanks to her email, I could easily understand and clarify what she thinks about the future of K-fashion.